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Astrid's avatar

Lay out the plans once more, my love, once more,

I swear it’s not true yet that all is lost.

Let’s spread our diagrams across the floor

Like children who don’t know what their games cost.

This map, the cityscape that once was ours,

Is pockmarked, and though I won’t assign blame,

I drew an X for each one of our failures,

Now I can hardly read a single name.

I have the plans for castles we would build,

The diagrams we drew at night together,

We were so young, so certain in our will,

The castle burned, but planning is forever.

Let’s still pretend it’s not over, one last

Time, my love, once more, lay out the plans.

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Chuck's avatar

MVP?

it's that nerdy little guy in the suit,

down there at the end of the bench.

12 seconds left & down by 3,

Watch him jump into action.

Arms flailing

words pleading

chalk dust flying,

the comeback architect draws up

more winning magic.

Then sits back down.

Game over.

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